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摘要:新航道上海學校雅思頻小編第一時間帶來分享每次雅思考試大作文范文及解析,希望對各位備考考生們有所幫助,對雅思寫作有所提高!本文是2021年9月11日雅思大作文范文及解析:大量使用自然資源帶來的危害!
新航道上海學校雅思頻小編第一時間帶來分享每次雅思考試大作文范文及解析,希望對各位備考考生們有所幫助,對雅思寫作有所提高!本文是2021年9月11日雅思大作文范文及解析:大量使用自然資源帶來的危害!
2021年9月11日雅思大作文題目
The natural resources such as oil, forests and fresh water are being consumed at an alarming rate.
What problems does it cause? How can we solve these problems?
解析:
本題討論“自然資源被飛快消耗”導致的問題和對應的解決方案
問題1:從生態角度考慮,如此快速地消耗會導致環境惡化;
問題2:從經濟角度考慮,能源消耗殆盡會導致國家發展受阻。
方案1:不可再生資源,要節約;方案2:可再生資源,要推廣
高分范文及解析
01
Unsustainable farming practices to feed our growing world population, together with excessive mining behavior and so on, are consuming resources faster than they can be replaced, which, if continuing unabated, can cause many adverse effects on ecology and economy. Luckily, these problems can be solved.
解析
unsustainable farming practices 不可持續的耕作方式
excessive mining behavior 過度的開采行為
unabated (程度上)不減的
adverse effects on … 負面影響
02
There are problems behind energy overconsumption; one is that it will ruin the environment. To elaborate, the burning of fossil fuels and the continuing loss of forests that serve as carbon dioxide sinks have increased the concentrations of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere, contaminating the air and generating global warming. Making things worse, human intervention in deforesting, farming, and polluting freshwater is depriving animals and plants of their habitats. This will threaten them with extinction. Another adverse effect we need to examine is that on the economy. As resources are becoming scarcer while the demand stays constant or even increases, the price of natural resources is set to rise significantly over time. This change is particularly hampering the economic growth in underdeveloped countries whose development heavily relies on the resources they may no longer be able to afford.
解析
concentration 濃度
contaminate 污染
generate 使形成
human intervention 人類干預
deprive … of … 剝奪
scarce 缺乏的
hamper 妨礙
03
Despite the numerous problems related to energy use, workable solutions exist. Firstly, to mitigate resource depletion, the government should introduce how detrimental the energy crisis is by media coverage. In this way, there will be a trend where, for example, the use of plastic and the disposal of things are seen as indecent, and resultingly, more resources will be saved. Secondly, it is a vital step to switch from non-renewable energies to alternative clean and renewable energies. With a proper budget permitted to develop renewable energy, scientists will be able to harness atomic, solar, and wind energy, with which the reliance on fossil ones can be reduced.
解析
workable solutions 可行的解決措施
mitigate resource depletion 緩解能源枯竭
detrimental 有害的
indecent 不得體的
harness 利用
04
In conclusion, the depletion of resources at an increased speed is likely to ruin the environment and stand in the way of social-economic development for many countries. Meanwhile, these problems can be tackled with proper intervention from the government.
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