新航道上海學校雅思頻小編第一時間帶來分享每次雅思考試大作文范文及解析，希望對各位備考考生們有所幫助，對雅思寫作有所提高!本文是2021年9月26日雅思大作文范文及解析：科技打擊犯罪還是鼓勵犯罪?

  2021年9月26雅思大作文題目

  Some people think technological development can reduce crime, while others think it actually encourages crime.

  Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

  高分范文及解析

  01

  Many may say, and I agree, that crime has fallen dramatically these days due to breakthroughs in technology. Yet, I am also convinced of the connection between them and the occurrence of certain crimes.

  02

  It is irrefutable that the latest technology can deter some would-be wrong-doers. They, for example the drivers or domestic abusers, may think twice before running a stoplight or inflicting harm on families to avoid being captured and sent to prison, thanks to the installation of digital cameras everywhere. The surveillance also makes it much easier to track suspects. Not only that, but law enforcement agencies are harnessing big data and analytic tools to predict where and when different types of crimes may occur. In this way, more police forces now are patrolling in high-risk areas, which ensures them to halt and eradicate crimes more effectively. (科技進步首先能震懾潛在罪犯：如攝像頭的存在作用;大數據分析同時還能預判犯罪行為的高發地，從而提高辦案效率。)

  解析

  irrefutable 無可辯駁的

  deter would-be wrong-doer威懾潛在的不法分子

  inflict harm on 對…施加傷害

  installation 安裝

  surveillance 監控，監視

  track suspects 追蹤嫌疑犯

  harness 利用

  patrol 巡邏

  halt 制止

  eradicate 消除

  03

  However, to a certain extent, advancement in technology opens more opportunities for criminals. Take the Internet as an example. Its anonymity and billions of active users daily make it a playground for potential online criminals, who unscrupulously steal others’ private information, such as bank account and phone number, online. Much of this eventually evolves into cyber fraud. In addition, the lack of money is one of the chief culprits shepherding people to commit crimes. With this in mind, should technology proliferate, more people may be desperate, because it allows for the replacement of human workers. Then, it is not difficult to understand why they end up being outlaws. (網絡的匿名性和大量的活躍用戶使網絡詐騙頻發;科技的進步在逐步取代人工，而失業會致使人犯罪。)

  解析

  open opportunities 提供機會

  anonymity 匿名性

  unscrupulously 無道德原則地

  evolve into 演變為

  chief culprit 罪魁禍首

  shepherd 誘使

  unscrupulously

  proliferate 擴散

  be desperate 鋌而走險

  outlaw 亡命之徒

  04

  In conclusion, technological development is not merely the crime stopper as it seems. It seems to me that realizing and avoiding the adverse impacts are equally essential.