新航道上海學校雅思頻小編第一時間帶來分享每次雅思考試大作文范文及解析，希望對各位備考考生們有所幫助，對雅思寫作有所提高!本文是2021年10月17日雅思大作文范文及解析：人們為什么努力工作?

  2021年10月17日雅思大作文題目

  The only reason for people working hard is to earn money.

  To what extent do you agree or disagree?

  破題：

  看見題中出現絕對詞，例如the best, the only 等，建議大家在考場上迅速決定采取 反對立場。因為這樣寫內容更加豐富。文章結構如下：

  【introduction】1. 說明題干觀點確實言之有理;2. 反駁題中唯一這個關鍵詞，同時預告下文將會介紹更多別的原因

  【body 1】1. 闡述題中觀點為何言之有理;2. 轉折，為下段陳述別的原因做鋪墊

  【body 2】 分別論證別的兩個原因

  【conclusion】重新闡明立場;最簡單的方法就是改寫開頭段第二句話

  高分范文及解析

  01

  Money, synonymous with more control over our own life and fewer constraints on our choices, motivates us to work and compels us to work harder. However, it does not follow that it is the only reason why people work, and this essay will elaborate some other reasons.

  解析

  * Compel v. 迫使;使必須

  * Synonymous adj.等同于;與...密不可分的

  02

  It is true that before taking a job a starting a business, most people, understandably, first look at the financial prospects. After all, with a handsome pay, they cannot only buy daily necessities, but also go through financial struggles like debts and loans. Hence, to earn a good salary, they are intrinsically motivated to work around the clock. However, this motivation cannot explain the fact that many old people with sufficient savings and pensions continue to work hard after their retirement, nor can it demonstrate the extra work time committed by the average people.

  解析

  * Handsome adj. 數量大的;

  * work around the clock 日以夜績的工作

  * Commit v. 花(錢或時間)

  03

  Therefore, in addition to money, there must be other reasons incentivizing people to work hard. Among them, the desire to climb the social ladder may be the most obvious one. Some workers with heavy workload cannot receive commensurate reward promptly, but they do not therefore shirk. This is because they want to showcase their talents, which is the precondition to get promoted and be respected. Another motivating factor is also convincing - to maintain a sense of community. Many senior citizens lead an isolated existence after retirement, which is scientifically proved to be hazardous to their mental and physical health. Hence, to alleviate loneliness or to keep fit, they choose to affiliate themselves with a company, where they live a busy yet meaningful life.

  解析

  * Commensurate adj. (在大小、重要性、質量等方面)相稱的，相當的

  * Shirk v. (工作)偷懶

  * 本段開頭的in addition to + 上段的內容(money)是為了完成段落間的銜接

  04

  In conclusion, while money is one main driving force behind people working hard, it is unfair to state that it is the only reason, because everyone’s priorities vary greatly.

  解析

  * 結尾段寫作最簡單的方法就是改寫開頭段第二句話

  * Vary v. 相異，不同，有別