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每場(chǎng)雅思考試之后,新航道上海學(xué)校 雅思頻道小編會(huì)第一時(shí)間分享每次雅思考試小作文范文及解析,希望對(duì)各位備考考生們有所幫助,對(duì)雅思寫(xiě)作有所提高!本期【雅思小作文真題直擊】,我們來(lái)以4月13日真題為例,再來(lái)為你支招小作文!
2019年4月13日雅思小作文題目
國(guó)內(nèi)(A類(lèi)):柱圖
高分范文及解析
首先,我們需要知道:柱圖的原始形式是表格:
思路:分組很重要!!
分兩組:歷史時(shí)間(2008年和2013年)一組,將來(lái)時(shí)間另一組。
首先,細(xì)化歷史時(shí)間一組的信息時(shí):history在兩個(gè)年份里都是極小數(shù)字,engineering在2013年最突出(同時(shí),biology和business的相同數(shù)目這一信息被舍棄),2008年比較顯眼(因?yàn)閎iology和engineering的數(shù)目相同)。
然后,細(xì)化將來(lái)時(shí)間一組:engineering最突出,另外三個(gè)學(xué)科差不多(同時(shí),只說(shuō)明最小數(shù)目在biology)。
給各位“烤鴨”打個(gè)樣兒:
The four groups of bars are the illustrations of the numbers of applications for four courses of a university in three separate years – 2008, 2013 and 2025.
In the two historical years, with merely 500 or 600 students studying it, History was the obvious undesired realm of study. [接下來(lái)一句“信息過(guò)渡”] Distinct from History, Business, Biology and Engineering were popular; however, their popularity varied. It is most notable that Engineering received as many as 5,000 applications [換個(gè)概念寫(xiě)作:“收到了6千份申請(qǐng)”,防止信息的生硬感] in the year of 2013. In addition, the year of 2008 is also noticeable, as it witnessed that the numbers of applicants for biology and for business were both 4,000. [主語(yǔ)劃線部分的兩種狀語(yǔ)形式]
By 2025, the high levels of [(某事物)的某種程度的] popularity of Engineering is likely to remain, and the estimate [估值] for the number of applicants is 6,000. By marked/stark contrast, the other three spheres are projected to be far [程度副詞] less desired, as they may receive fewer than 1,000 applications.
Overall, Engineering and History were the two most noteworthy courses in the past, and the year of 2025 will see the same pattern.
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